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Monday 23 September 2013

Takei and the moon


One day there was a god called Takei. He was angry at  the Moon. So he made a trap to catch the Moon. His mother was crying and moaning at her son but he wouldn’t listen. But his mother found
the bamboo trap and his mother put fresh water in the bamboo poles After that Takei told his men to dig a hole and put trees over the Hole. When it was night time and the moon went across the sky it got in the trap. Takei put the water over the moon but it kept on shining.

2 comments:

  1. Great retelling Taiaha. Where is this story from? Can you draw a picture to go with your story please?

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  2. Hi Taiaha,
    My name is Courtney Brown. I am a student in EDM 310 at the University of South Alabama. I enjoyed reading your story. I liked how Takei thought he was going to trap the moon, but in the end the moon continued to shine. Why was Takei angry with the moon? You did a great job telling your story!

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