Wednesday, 3 April 2013
easter
On Saturday my family went to the warehouse.
My sister and I got one big block
of chocolate and then we went to Pak n Save
we had to get a drink . Then we had to
get some pipis after a while we went
to the Gi pools and my mum and dad cooked the meat while my sister and I had
a swim.Then my mum and dad called us
to have lunch then we went home .
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Hi Taiaha,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading about what you did during your Easter break. When you're writing, try to add more detail like your sister's name, what kind of day it was, were there lots of people at the pools and how you felt.
Keep it up!
From Miss Lavakula