My papa is always doing work outside he like to fix cars my papa is a builder he is always outside when i be bad I get a big smack with the
bat when we be good i get a toy my gradad is always takin the lag he always which his movie in the la.
My nana is always cooking in the kitchen she loves to cook we always
makes cookies and she lets me go on her computer we play on cool math game my nana like to fold our close and she like to clean the lag up.
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